Tassen Spellbinder

The books aren't great, but if nothing else they are popular, and promote young people actually READING for a change and getting their noses out of their cell phones, 4-wheelers, ...

Impressive. My only comment is that (in my oppinion) the lines "Your limited days are spilled, wasted upon your insolence." sound a bit odd... but hey, that's just me. Good ...

I hate the Lord of the Rings, actually. I've read the Hobbit, but couldn't finish the other books. I read Harry Potter first, and never enjoyed Lord of the Rings ...

Amen.

I've read the trillogy. Best thing ever.

*claps loudly* Bravo, very good.

Hehe. who's the guy? maybe we both do know him.

Prehaps you should say more about describing the dragon, such as... what color dragon is it?

I was trying to describe me, but i guess I overlooked that nowhere in it does it say that that's who is being described. Prehaps if I changed the title ...

Other than some grammar issues, I would use a thesarus (I spelled that wrong, I think) for parts of it, but other wise, that was good.

Really? Thanks!

It was supposed to be me, but I see what you're all getting at, it is a bit rough...

will someone please crit this?

Short, but sweet. I like it.

thanks, everyone.